I have a house in my hometown. That’s a big house. My house is green painted wall. It has a large yard in front of the house, and it also has a large backyard. I can play football and badminton in my house yard. My house has seven rooms. The rooms are dining room, bathroom, three bedrooms, living room, and kitchen.
The atmosphere in my house is very cool, because there are many plants in the backyard. The plants are coconut tree, mango tree, sapodilla tree, guava tree, pineapple tree and etc. When the trees produce fruits, I can pick the fruit, and I can make fruit juice. I’m a fortunate person, because I have a comfortable house to live.
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BalasHapusfor the sentence "My house has seven rooms." and "The rooms are dining room, bathroom, three bedrooms, living room, and kitchen."
BalasHapusyou can combine two sentences become one sentence by using comma, like "My house has seven rooms, there are dining room, bathroom, three bedrooms, living room, and kitchen."
just make it simple way dude. .
Thank you very much adam.. it is very good suggestion. But, I just want to make a compound sentence dam. Not a simple sentence. :-)
HapusThe atmosphere in my house is very cool, because there are many plants in the backyard
BalasHapusthe word "cool" in this content, i think better if you use "windy"
Thanks for your suggestion.. but I mean atmosphere in my house is cool. Not windy, because there is not wind. But, thank you very much for your suggestion. . .
HapusIn academic writing, don't forget! :)
BalasHapusThat’s a big house > That is a big house
I’m a fortunate person > I am a fortunate person
Okay, Thank you very much fikri..:)
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